From 6b33c4dbd08bce981eef3717ac2e0c9b53eb05eb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Ian Dunn <ian@iandunn.name>
Date: Thu, 24 Oct 2019 07:23:17 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Pledge Form: Update string to reflect latest flows.

The link that they're emailed is to confirm their address, rather than to manage the pledge.

Their pledge will be published once the address is confirmed and contributors have confirmed their participation, rather than after moderation.
---
 plugins/wporg-5ftf/includes/pledge-form.php  |  1 +
 plugins/wporg-5ftf/views/form-pledge-new.php | 23 +++++++++++++++-----
 2 files changed, 19 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/plugins/wporg-5ftf/includes/pledge-form.php b/plugins/wporg-5ftf/includes/pledge-form.php
index 76275d3..ab4e3ba 100755
--- a/plugins/wporg-5ftf/includes/pledge-form.php
+++ b/plugins/wporg-5ftf/includes/pledge-form.php
@@ -27,6 +27,7 @@ function render_form_new() {
 	$data     = get_form_submission();
 	$messages = [];
 	$complete = false;
+	$directory_url = get_permalink( get_page_by_path( 'pledges') );
 
 	if ( 'Submit Pledge' === $action ) {
 		$processed = process_form_new();
diff --git a/plugins/wporg-5ftf/views/form-pledge-new.php b/plugins/wporg-5ftf/views/form-pledge-new.php
index bfdd8be..c23ec62 100755
--- a/plugins/wporg-5ftf/views/form-pledge-new.php
+++ b/plugins/wporg-5ftf/views/form-pledge-new.php
@@ -3,8 +3,12 @@ namespace WordPressDotOrg\FiveForTheFuture\View;
 
 use function WordPressDotOrg\FiveForTheFuture\get_views_path;
 
-/** @var array $messages */
-/** @var bool  $complete */
+/**
+ * @var array  $messages
+ * @var bool   $complete
+ * @var string $directory_url
+ */
+
 ?>
 
 <p>
@@ -24,11 +28,20 @@ use function WordPressDotOrg\FiveForTheFuture\get_views_path;
 <?php if ( true === $complete ) : ?>
 
 	<div class="notice notice-success notice-alt">
-		<p><?php esc_html_e( 'Thanks for pledging Five for the Future! Your new pledge profile has been created, and we’ve emailed you a link you can use to edit your pledge in the future. Your contributors have also been emailed a link to confirm their contributions with your organization.', 'wporg' ); ?></p>
+		<p><?php esc_html_e( 'Thanks for pledging to Five for the Future! Your new pledge profile has been created, and we’ve emailed you a link to confirm your address. Your contributors have also been emailed a link to confirm their participation with your organization.', 'wporg' ); ?></p>
 
-		<p><?php esc_html_e( 'Once your pledge has been approved by a moderator, it will appear in the pledges list.', 'wporg' ); ?></p>
+		<p>
+			<?php echo wp_kses_post( sprintf(
+				__( 'After those steps are completed, your pledge will appear in <a href="%s">the directory</a>.', 'wporg' ),
+				esc_url( $directory_url )
+			) ); ?>
+		</p>
 
-		<p><?php esc_html_e( 'Want to hire additional employees to contribute to WordPress? Post a job listing on jobs.wordpress.net.', 'wporg' ); ?></p>
+		<p>
+			<?php echo wp_kses_post(
+				__( 'Do you want to hire additional employees to contribute to WordPress? <a href="https://jobs.wordpress.net">Post a job listing on jobs.wordpress.net</a>.', 'wporg' )
+			); ?>
+		</p>
 	</div>
 
 <?php else : ?>